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  • June 23, 2019 5:02 PM EDT
    "Perpetual Motion"

    Enravished, her essence pours forth of delicious wounds in shuddering starts and stops

    She forces it, relentlessly, into that ocean of pixels and light which delights so frequently in her indulgence

    Stroke by stroke, her words emerge: pale phantoms all, the end result of a transmutation ill-informed

    Meaning independent of context, she is become empathy's shadow, an emotion inverted and teeming with the foreign attributes of its opposite

    Seduced by its own hand, bleeding backward, its origin in blushing submission to its own immediate need

    Her expressions read alien even to herself, altered in transmission and begging of any venue less challenging, less imposing, more familiar

    She'll take this because it's what she wants for herself, and she is not ashamed

    The words strengthen as they proliferate, feeding her lush vulnerability in sums far more intoxicating than the components she intended for them

    Breath quickening, her fingers work faster, her body in rebellion as it sings unbidden and lends action to meaning, passion to pleas, radiance burning in gradually-compounding waves with every new phrase and trembling truth

    Her viewscreen erupts endlessly in the glowing cycle and recycle of her boundless issue, rhythms pulsing, ebbing, growing, slowing: all in salient service to the perpetual motion of her sinful engine, that all-too-frequent impetus now driving her application to another place, away of the digital devil currently raiding the physical while searching its source

    Eyes fluttering, she divorces the electric external and revels in delicate fingertips easing her demand, the meaning of all she transmutes emerging in halting gasps, agonized ecstasy in a flow of human weakness too achingly beautiful to resist
    Molecules of the surrounding atmosphere part sensuously to the gentle undulation of her exquisite machinations, giving in to the vibrations her long-awaited mantra teases and awakens in the cool night air

    Her need is now palpable, expressed in its final stages of mathematical perfection: a golden spiral of thoughts to desires to inscriptions to conflagration to realized balance and the sweet intonations of the climactic infinite:

    Don't stop...

    Please don't stop...

  • cats
    • 4 posts
    June 25, 2019 1:04 AM EDT
    This is so incredibly well written. I reread it 3 times to take in all the details.
    My question, is she a cam girl?
  • June 25, 2019 5:36 PM EDT
    Wow - I'm so glad you read it! I shouldn't have posted this in Forums, but I was unaware of the "Writings" category we all have at our disposal! Once I discovered that, I put this piece there and tried to delete it from forums, to no avail... oh well... chalk it up to newbie ignorance. An excellent question - in actuality, I'd envisioned her an erotic writer, excited by her own words as she writes them, her arousal compounding exponentially as her lust fuels her prose, which in turn fuels her lust further, fueling her prose further, and so on in an endless cycle of blissful abandon. While I know it seems overromanticized, I have a thing for erotic writers and have always suspected the most passionate practitioners of writing as much to their own climaxes as to those of potential readers, if you know what I mean. My imagination is often just as intrigued by the woman behind the pen and the way she indulges herself through writing as it is by the actual story she's written. Of course, I could be totally wrong; for all I know, female erotic writers could be cranking out the most delicious of lascivious encounters while scarfing donuts at Starbucks... but, I like my fantasies! Whatever else it may be to a reader, erotic poetry and literature is definitely artistic masturbation, so my fevered brain enjoys imagining it as such in a more literal manner. So, she could certainly be a cam girl, now that I reread it with that notion in mind... but I initially imagined that what she does, she does for herself in shameless indulgence. At any rate, thank you so much for the awesome compliment! Considering the source, I'm blown away!